Forgetting You

"Sure I'll forget you
And pretend you're not around
And you better believe
I'll never think of you
And how great you made me feel
when I was down"

-- I liked this as an opening. It explained the title right away, which I like. Howeverrrr.. I think you should make all of your stanza's the same length. But that's just me being picky. Hahah.

"I'll never again look
into your eyes
And see all the feelings
your love defies "

-- Oh, my! I love love love these rhymes! Beautiful word choice, as well.

"Oh don't worry
I won't think of how
wonderful you are
Because I know your only
Just a long-gone star"

-- Comma after "Oh". I think you should remove "Just" in the last line. Also, "your" should be "you're".

*Overall, I loved it. I liked the emotion, and the word choice. The flow was good, too. Great job on this.

Five out of five. [5/5]

``Briana

VERY GOOD POEM I CAN RELATE TO HAVING THE SAME FEELINGS TOWARDS A EX OF MINE IT'S LIKE YOU SAY THINGS BUT DEEP DOWN YOU REALLY DON'T MEAN THEM CAUSE YOU STILL HAVE FEELINGS FOR THEM, GREAT JOB!

I really love this poem...I wish I can forget him :[
Anyway,great job...
Keep writing :]

Love it :P
Favoured it ;P

Omgsh.. I love this poem.. Favoured it ;) Great Job =]