Hey, great LOVE poem :). I dont know if your writing from prior experiences, but if you are, im sorry. I know how you feel. Besides the "to" on the second sentence in the second stanza, ths poem is flawless.
Aken Sol

Thanks for the spell check Aken! Thank goodness for the edit link thingy.

I really love this poem. I really this type of writing. Keep it up.