Comments : Mirror mirror on the wall

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    Very deep, I like the emotion
    you put into. You destroy what
    gives you your insacurity. Beautifuly
    written, I love the last line, is sums it
    up just perfectly. Definatly a 5/5.

    -mandy

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Ghis was very deep and really good. This is one of the best I've read from you so far. can't wait to read more. keep it up!
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    "mirror mirror, you don't define me"

    i hate any and all reflective surfaces. i just do. *hugs* so i can relate.

  • 16 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Very good poem =]
    based on the "mirror mirror on the wall" in snow white, is it?

    you play your words well and i enjoyed reading this
    although it is a sad poem and i'm sure your not at all ugly =P

    "Mirror mirror on the wall"
    "Watch you shatter"
    "Watch you fall"
    my fav part =]

    keep up the good work!! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Good work...This was me a little while ago

  • 16 years ago

    by xxKelsey

    Very nice. i like the repetition. 5/5