I love it i love it i love it

the only thing that might help would be to break the poem up into stanzas but i think your writing is great

This is a good poem very well done glad to of read it
its interesting and its better to stand out
because then you dont have to worry whats the latest thing you can be what YOU think is the latest thing but anyways good job glad to of read it
hope to read more

Keenan