You're the kind of girl they warn us about

by Tim   May 25, 2008


Your the kind of girl they warn us about,
you just aim to hurt.
You make us men fall in love,
to then fall in the dirt.

You promise us everything,
love, happiness, and devotion.
The only thing you forget to tell,
is it comes with all the commotion.

You tell us we're the only one,
in the innocent voice of yours.
Then when we accept your proposal,
you get your claws.

You take the heart we have given you,
and rip it to shreds.
Still after all you've done,
your unhappiness is all we dread

That’s the worst of your little game,
you know we can't do without you.
You can do as you please,
and still we never doubt you.

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  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    I like this poem and I actually like the title a lot!

    First stanza- I like this start because it is so true sometimes where they hurt us. Because they do make us feel like dirt at times if we find the wrong girl.!! Great start.

    Second stanza- This males sense. Because if anyone wants anyone they do promise us all this then out comes all the fighting. Not all girls are like this though. I know you saying from a certain person I think though because it tells a story!. We seem happy at first but people lie to get us to like them!!.

    Third stanza- it seems like we are the only one but in the end we get hurt. I love how you used claws as a metaphor for anything that can hurt us. Words or anything!

    Fourth stanza- I think this is my favorite. We do take that leap into love and when we do we give up something so fragile. When we get hurt ot is torn to shreads. You are right though wr still always want them to br happy.

    Ending- we would never hurt anyone wr fall for! I love how you put it as a game but we still love them no matter what! I love this write again! 5

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Whoa.. yeah gurls do that. they have done that to me and guys too. they both genters are kinda the same in the emotional way. in a way. idk if u get what me saying but yeah. lol nicely done.
    5/5

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

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