Sacrifice

by ..::Angel of your darkness::..   May 25, 2008


My body torn and beaten
I fall from the sky
The pains of the past rip me
And tear apart my insides

I can't remember
The life I lived before
My wounds now open
Will forever remain sore

My wings are tattered
My body bare
The world around me
Can only watch and stare

I've been chosen
To fight a war far greater than me
My battle is against all
The fire, earth, wind and sea

I'm just a girl
With no real story to tell
All I know is
I sacrificed heaven to fight for hell

This is a poem mostly to do with the book I'm writing, it's about someone giving up heaven, and falling, so they can fight for the earth, which is why they 'sacrificed heaven to fight for hell' ^^

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  • 15 years ago

    by blackheartslove

    Incredible. you have a truly amazing talent. that poem was awesome. i loved it. you have such a beautiful style.. its easy to get caught up in your work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Beautiful... simply beautiful ! Well written & beautifully penned. The idea was great and it lies perfectly in each line you've penned. And that last line in your poem was a great grand finale. Great job, keep it up. Can't wait to read your book...make sure you tell us when it's published 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow, that was beautiful
    you have got a truly stunning style.
    Your book is more than likely gonna be
    like beyond amazing
    if this is just the poem that
    its based on.
    I loved it,
    great job, keep up the good work,
    ***take care***

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    That's amazing...I want to read ur book too. Angel your the best poet I know of. Your my reason for writing. Your talent is so unrivaled. Your poems are so full of sadness but they always make me happy. Your a gifted individual. Great job.

    -forever yours, me

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