by Mimi
I love the first line in the last stanza. the message and writing is great. i dont think this piece is universal b/c everyone interprets different weather in their own way but i do like the poem. |
by Lima Pappa
I love your poems |
Life is like the seasons |
by Nobodys Hero
This poem has a very good rhyming flow it was enjoyable to follow. All of your stanzas are well written and i found your style intresting =] |
Nice work, you described the seasons .. winter, summer, spring, and fall, very well.. i must add. you could tell easily which season you were mentioning. great work 5/5.. |
by NinjaGirl
This piece of poetry is simply and utterly amazing. every single word brought a vivid picture to mind. It had great imagery, and amazing wording. |