by oddi tea May 25, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
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Laying in the grass |
by SashaMirage
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Wow that was truely poetic art that you wrote. I loved every word, you kept me anticipating the ending. And I was very pleased with the way you ended it. 5/5 |
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Wow. The flow of the poem is amazing, as is it's message. Lovely. |
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Wow |
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I love how it was a story and was able to flow so smoothly and leave me hanging off of everyword, |