I love how it was a story and was able to flow so smoothly and leave me hanging off of everyword,

good job!

Wow
loved the way of your poem and how you speak to him in this way

good job

Wow. The flow of the poem is amazing, as is it's message. Lovely.

The Angel of Secrets

Wow that was truely poetic art that you wrote. I loved every word, you kept me anticipating the ending. And I was very pleased with the way you ended it. 5/5