Our Dark Love

by Something Diabolical   May 25, 2008


A frozen heart will die forever
Drowning in the flames of today
Being with you is all that matters
Making my soul want to stray

The hell of love will rise
Together with our hearts
The heaven of hate will fall
The agony of love finally starts

Angels of blood will laugh together
Whilst our hearts will burn as one
Devils of tears will weep forever
And the damage will be done

Together we will be
Forever a dying light
Love will set us free
Deep and dark as the night

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  • 16 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    I really liked it. it showed theres more to love than the happy always good times people see. i really loved the part
    "Angels of blood will laugh together
    whilst our hearts will burn as one"
    but the overall image of the poem was amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    I thought that it was gorgeous! very deep and emotional. fantastic job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Too many filler words and forced rhyming. I also don't like to see heaven and hate together because it just doesn't sound right.

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Voice and Tender Heart

    How do I word this? Short, wonderful, great, emotional, lovely. I hope those 5 words explained what I felt. Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    It's short, but I totally love the rhyming in this. It flowed greatly. This poem is excellent and great work. 5/5 well done..

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