The name caught my eye
i like how this talks, not just about how wonderfull love is, but about the true darkness of it
Angels of blood will laugh together
Whilst our hearts will burn as one
Devils of tears will weep forever
And the damage will be done
-- fav. part
yet another 5/5

That was a very diffrent way to
look at love, I liked it a lot, it really
made me think, awsome poem, 5/5.

-mandy

This is a very emotional poem

But in a good way I felt like you connected to the poem and thought about it before you posted it

The flow was very nice too, you can tell you really focused on hitting those syllables hard

Great work 5/5

It's short, but I totally love the rhyming in this. It flowed greatly. This poem is excellent and great work. 5/5 well done..

How do I word this? Short, wonderful, great, emotional, lovely. I hope those 5 words explained what I felt. Keep up the good work.

Too many filler words and forced rhyming. I also don't like to see heaven and hate together because it just doesn't sound right.

I thought that it was gorgeous! very deep and emotional. fantastic job.

I really liked it. it showed theres more to love than the happy always good times people see. i really loved the part
"Angels of blood will laugh together
whilst our hearts will burn as one"
but the overall image of the poem was amazing