Murder Me With Your Love.

by Courageous Dreamer   May 26, 2008


Surround me and give me a firm embrace,
Hold me tight and never let me go.
Put your arms around me and sing me a lovable lullaby
Let me feel the warmth of love.
Whisper those sweet words in my ear,
Put me to sleep as I listen to your voice.

Show me how you would love someone like me,
Tell me what I want to hear,
Say those three words I wish to listen to everyday.

Show me, tell me, express what you feel for me,
Baby..just murder me.
Murder me with every ounce of love you have within your soul.

Cover me with passionate kisses and never let me go,
Murder me with your love baby, murder me with everything you've got.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    So interesting and nicely written..it had me speeechless it was so good.. wow0_5_

  • 16 years ago

    by Love Fallacy

    Intersting choice of words in this one. I like this one the least out of the ones i did read. Not sure how much i like the way you used murder. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by smiley

    Nice poem ur expert n thx for help me I promise I do better in my poem am just begginer tho

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    I love this poem., i love how you want the person to "murder you" with love. I never read a poem like this before with those kinda lines. very well done.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    My favorite lines are:
    'Show me how you would love someone like me,
    Tell me what I want to hear'

    I feel like that all the time adn could really relate.

    Well-written and strong emotions.
    5/5! for sure!

    Love
    Tina

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