How would you feel?

by Lonely Rider   May 26, 2008


How would you feel if you are stranded?
How would you feel if you are alone in crowded?

How would you feel if your mother leaves you one day?
How would you feel if someone forgets your birthday?

How would you feel if your emotions remain unveiled?
How would you feel if every attempt to smile failed?

How would you feel if your only friend is sorrow?
How would you feel if you have no tommorow?

** these are just random thoughts... :)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Your poem was nice these are questions we all ask ourselves everyday, reminds of me of my father and i even though i havent seen him in 6 years nice poem 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Hey how come so many can relate to this poem n words...

    I dont have frens, no relatives or family members... , N I feel so lonely still wen I m with nature or I c a child n its smile... I forget all d deppression n Feel there r others who r more unlucky than myself tat I sumtimes think.....

    N poems r inspiring n give courage too....

    Nice poem..... n such poems make readers feel cheer up.... u have company may it b in d form of poetic words.... a world of itz own...

    Keep it up...

    Best wishz..... Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Random but yet depressing thoughts, there would be nothing left to feel if any of this happens to me but the only thing i am sure of is...life will move on and so will i.

    Thats how life is meant to be & i know if i have faith...good days will come too, all i need is faith and hope.

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    It would feel like...being Noor.. :D Or being you... I would feel like being lonely person...everyone has forgot...A flower on the wall...A small drop in the ocean..

    But you see..everyone of us..have to go though this..this state..

    When we notice we are not the centre of world we will become kinder to each others..This will develope us... And those..who like is all smiling...smiling looses it's meaning.. To know what is sweetness must taste bitter to feel the difference..

    How would I feel if there is tomorrow...? I should feel good because I would have been one step closer to sun, progressing... I would still feel good..

    Nice poem. :)