I just read her poem, then yours. I love it, I like how you did a response, very nice! :)

Awe. a very nice write. you expressed the emotions in this piece very nicely. the flow was nice and the vocab was perfect. a very enjoyable read, especially the ending. :] 5/5.

Nice job, i loved it...6/5

I know sol means sun, but does it need to be capitalized? I don't know when to capitalize it.
Same for pacifica which I'm assuming translates into the ocean or something along those lines.

rainbows spectrum
It is the rainbow's spectrum requiring an apostrophe for ownership.

Other than that it's a great poem. I adore the metaphors you used in this. As always a five out of five.

I really liked this. And in response to another poem makes it even better because it gives you something to compare it to. I loved the words you used like emblazon, very effective.

A very good response to I AM. Great way to show different observations of the same situations. M/F perceptions.