Comments : Trapped in the darkside

  • VERY WELL DONE 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    Excellent poem, but u r wrong Cy I have been to the darkside and now I am in the sunshine. Don't give up, you can do it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    I can totally relate cy, totally i no how you feel, unfortunatly i am starting to believe what you have said in your excellent poem....Once your there it will eternally haunt you and always be a constant fight....even if your strong enough to see the light.....im with you mate..excellent write though love it....words deliver clearly the torture you have felt or maybe still feeling....

  • 16 years ago

    by Alliey May

    I can sooooo relate you to in this poem! I get what you mean when you say it'll haunt you cuz boii does it and it seems that it'll never :[..but this was excellent and wonderful! Absolutely loved it and I understand where your coming from...I feel you pain as well...

    Love Always ~ All!ey

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Um... like WOW,
    that was amazing.
    Your words were so powerful and true.
    I could really relate to this poem.
    Truly was an amazing piece!!
    Well done on yet another outstanding write!!

  • 16 years ago

    by 14th

    Yo Another hit...u keep throwing the world through ur eyes so those blind can see it....

  • 15 years ago

    by Emily

    I feel the same way. perfect, great poem.

    <3,
    emily