Comments : Betrayed (by your eyes)

  • 16 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    Ensnared by your wording
    so Shackled.
    Stunned.

    one of my favourite poem... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow! Absolutely mind-blowing! This is utterly powerful piece. I honestly enjoyed in every word, very descriptive and vivid. You expressed your emotions on remarkable way, choice of words is great and whole idea of this poem fascinated me with its uniqueness. You truly created effective rhythm. I think that this is one of the best poems I read in a long time, it goes into my favorites and I will leave you more detail comment later.