I was kind of taken back by
Haven fallen.
It just sounds, well, funky.

I had to look up the word Haven in the dictionary.
I was so sure that it was a noun.

Until it said that, it could also be a verb.
"To shelter"

Hold on for dear life, and all that you treasure
Do not compromise a sacrament for pleasure

I love that.
Just the flow in those lines were
Flawless.

I loved that part.

Everything to lose, and nothing to gain
You just said, on the line before this
A moment of pleasure.
Doesn't that mean you GAIN a moment of pleasure?

All that [once?] was holy is difficult to get back

All in all.
I really like this.
It wasn't simple
It wasn't difficult to understand either.

I actually didn't have to look up words
Other than that haven thing.

Good write :]

This one reminds of my recent poem but you have written so well and in deeper meaning.. great job

Reminds of my recent poem but this one is only in new and better form.. as in wow you have composed a deeper meaning and creative ideas.