A FATAL VIEW

by Fatal   May 26, 2008


First glance at me, and what will you see?
my clothing....black as day.
light as night.
my black hair covering half my face is the case.
my skin is white as night.
pale as day.
unfortunately this I cannot sway.
gashes and slashes covering my body.
the last thing you will notice is my stare.
cold as ash looking into the soul.
my eyes no one can bare.
that is what you will see...............outside of me.

but inside what will you see?
sadness, madness, fury, and disgrace.
love, hate, disgust, and lust.
that is what you will see................inside of me.

[a short but true description of me]

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  • 16 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Terrible, I'm laughing. Stop attempting to grow up before your time.

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    You got a excellent way of putting things down
    13 wow i love to see what you will be writting
    at 23 another 5 vote here if you read one of my
    poems read < I am your disease> I think you
    will relate kinda one of my crazy ones

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    WOW! that i very sad,but i understand it. i do the same thing, i mean use to...cut myself. and i would feel all these things like grief, pain, and love. so i understand. i loved this poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by doXyouXeverXwonder

    Very good poem. I like your expression...

  • 16 years ago

    by Brad Quammen

    So short but length doesn't determine if your message is shared or not.Very good job 5/5

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