Me N You

by That One Girl   May 27, 2008


You say you care about me
I care about you, too
but there is nothing more we can do

You are afraid of what your friends will think
I respect that,
but I'm starting to sink

I don't want to let you go
it hurts,
I have to though

Time is standing still
as you look into my eyes
I realize

Maybe we weren't ment to be
us...together
don't you see?

I watch you slip away
with tears in my eyes
and a fake smile on my face

I'll miss you
forever
but I have to be through

I have to live without you
there is no other way
I wish I could stay

I will cry
maybe even die
I love you,
and goodbye

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  • 16 years ago

    by MariaJose94

    I love the way u express your self..really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wow hard sacrifice to do like this, i am speachless sometimes in these situations , dont be fustrated ,love si something , we proud of , not hide from the frineds, they are friedns if they are happy for you and supoort you , in waht make you happy

    if he loved you from the frist place he will nto wory his friends saying
    i thinkit is good to do like you did

    for the strucutre it s good trilplet with good rhyming i can imagine the words got out naturaly
    perfect one

  • 16 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    Beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow your express your emotions well, especially in this poem. i loved it. so sad. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

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