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by Cupid May 27, 2008 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
I am alive, but away. I Got so many dreams in my head. They just won't go away. I hate and love my life. The Line is thin. Will I Forfill My life purpose. Who Knows.. chances are slim. Should I Give up, or Go On Choose To Stand Up or Stand Up, To Take a New Chance, To Fall. Walk Toward The Light.. Or Let Dawn take my soul. Can't decide because since I lost my mother. I Lost My Reason, To Make The Good Calls.* I'd Like To View Comments and please vote for my poem(s) *
by adroit
Very good poem. It has a lot of emotion and meaning behind it, and a pretty good flow to it. Keep writing. Honest Luck. Sarah
by ImWaiting4Him
Greatnesss i really like it
by Andree
I like it a lot keep up the good work