by Lonely Rider May 27, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Crying in solitude (Monchielle) |
by Lady Nik
Wow a very different piece here. I loved it and how the first lined repeated throughout. Great way to create emphasis. I loved the softness of your words and how constant the flow was. This was a wonderful piece dear. Very well done. Nik |
by Keith
This is a great poem, with great structure, you didnt need to explain it though, the brilliance of it was visible in the flow. thnks for commentin me btw :) |
by Rachel RTVW
Good word choice and imagery in this piece. My only suggestion is : |
by pookiengurgi
Beatifully written |
by NinjaGirl
An excellent piece of poetry! it flowed very well. great word use. an amazing piece of poetry 5/5 |