You're Pretty Amazing, Boy

by xxkweenbee   May 27, 2008


Its been a while, boy
a while since i actually sat and adored you
but everyday, your smile gets me through
your brilliance illuminates, and its oh so a drug
a drug that i am addicted to.

you're pretty amazing, boy
and i think I'm falling in love
but i know that my heart has lied before,
should i trust it now, does it speak with honesty?
i think I'll stick with imaginary bond between us.

this is for you, boy
from first glance i knew,
i knew that this content in my heart was forbidden
and even if you don't hold me, or call me your girl
i congratulate you on hi-jacking my thoughts.

it's not everyday, boy
it's not everyday some wonderful person,
has the ability to sidetrack me,
without even trying
but your heart and mine, have no place.

you're just, a boy
a boy turning into a mortal man,
and mortal men fall in love again as fast as my heart beats,
think of the hearts you have broken, match that with empty vowels and broken promises you've spoken.

you're pretty amazing, boy
but i know i can find someone better
one that can take my heart and drown it in love,
and I'll find him one day, boy
one day..

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxkweenbee

    Oh wow,
    Thank You Guys, Alot.
    I never expected such a reaction.
    =]
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by death cab cutie

    So I love this poem. The whole time I was thinking of that guy that I've spent every third period starting at. I love him and I've only talked to him five times, yes I've counted. He makes my heart skip a beat and I'd be happy just being his friend. I wouldn't mind a relationship but friendship is good enough for me.

    But this poem is really good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This poem was, wow... I was in awe the entire time I was reading it. Actually, I still am in awe. It was very beautiful. You wrote it in such a unique way too.. it was so creative, something you don't usually see. I loved it! You took the risk and it paid off entirely. I mostly loved how you change the first time in every stanza, just a little bit, to make it match what you were about to say. I thought it was genius!

    this is for you, boy
    from first glance i knew,
    i knew that this content in my heart was forbidden
    and even if you don't hold me, or call me your girl
    i congratulate you on hi-jacking my thoughts.

    That has to be my most favorite stanza out of this entire piece. I just adore how you compared thinking about him all of the time, to him hi-jacking your thoughts. I've never seen anything like it before. I think you really out-did yourself with this amazing poem. It's one of those rare ones that are so beautiful.. that you don't normally see but long to see. Great, job, hunni. I found myself amazed by the entire piece. I could even relate to so much of it.. which is a bonus. Keep it up, sweetie. I know you'll do great things with that talent of yours. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

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