This poem was, wow... I was in awe the entire time I was reading it. Actually, I still am in awe. It was very beautiful. You wrote it in such a unique way too.. it was so creative, something you don't usually see. I loved it! You took the risk and it paid off entirely. I mostly loved how you change the first time in every stanza, just a little bit, to make it match what you were about to say. I thought it was genius!

this is for you, boy
from first glance i knew,
i knew that this content in my heart was forbidden
and even if you don't hold me, or call me your girl
i congratulate you on hi-jacking my thoughts.

That has to be my most favorite stanza out of this entire piece. I just adore how you compared thinking about him all of the time, to him hi-jacking your thoughts. I've never seen anything like it before. I think you really out-did yourself with this amazing poem. It's one of those rare ones that are so beautiful.. that you don't normally see but long to see. Great, job, hunni. I found myself amazed by the entire piece. I could even relate to so much of it.. which is a bonus. Keep it up, sweetie. I know you'll do great things with that talent of yours. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

So I love this poem. The whole time I was thinking of that guy that I've spent every third period starting at. I love him and I've only talked to him five times, yes I've counted. He makes my heart skip a beat and I'd be happy just being his friend. I wouldn't mind a relationship but friendship is good enough for me.

But this poem is really good!

Oh wow,
Thank You Guys, Alot.
I never expected such a reaction.
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