Sometimes life surprises you

by Ares   May 27, 2008


I'm begging for a new start,
I'm begging for a new heart.
I'm begging for the rush,
I'm begging to let my checks blush.

you changed my views,
you paid my dues,
you changed my life.

I know I'm being way too serious now,
I know I'm being way too happy,
I know I'm being a fool.

I'm praying for a new romance,
I'm praying to get to hold your hands,
I'm praying to a new found God,
I'm praying just to keep being odd.

you changed my views,
you paid my dues,
you changed my life.

I know I'm being way too serious now,
I'm know I'm being way too happy,
I know I'm being a fool.

I'll gladly be a fool for you.
sometimes life surprises you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by shamvi

    This is simple and nice...i can even sing this..lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    'I'll gladly be a fool for you.
    sometimes life surprises you.'
    This is a really sweet line! I really like it. Buuut--this line is a bit awkward (to me)
    'I'm praying just to keep being odd.'
    I kind of feel like it's the child of necessity for rhyme. I dunno. I like the poem in all though! The repitition is really very becoming for it...great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Sumtimes life surprises u.... So nicely explained....

    Good... keep it up

    Best wishz... Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    How adorable poem is that...You feel yourself a bit fool but that is all love sometimes do...You feel there is hope...You are begging for a chance to get that hope...That soooo...new love... So happy feelings..You are flying above clouds...so sweet...so sweet.. :D

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