Comments : Loosing my grip

  • 16 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    I like this poem very diff...strong voice to this poem as well..5/5 ur poem is so fexcellent....o thats my word fexcellent..i like to make my own words sometimes...lol but anyways all in all a great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    I like the repetition of the line I'm invisible to everyone around me
    and for some reason i really liked the part where u said i daydream of a family that loves me
    and friends that like me for who i am
    good job
    =)
    and nice name btw