A Broken Heart

by Heba   May 27, 2008


I was faithful, whenever you asked for something
I was helpful
I've done all my best, only not to hurt your feelings
In treating you, I was so careful
Our friendship was just wonderful
I thought it would last forever
But, you did something was wrong, and so painful
And you don't realize how much it was hurtful
You thought hurting other people's feelings is incredible
Because you are just an ignorant
You are so disdainful

But, you have just broken my heart
You have torn it to pieces
And it is now apart
My sorrow will start
My blood is falling and crawling away from my heart
My soul is fading away, and I am so near to die
Unless you leave and go away from in front of my eye
Please I don't want to see you
Because you were just a big liar, and a fake too

It is much better to depart

Because you have crossed my heart
With your intense sword
While I was asking the lord
To help me to afford
This unfinished torture
So, please leave me alone
Because you are so abhorred

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  • 15 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    Really, really amazing!!! I love it.. You expressed it beautifully & perfectly. 5/5.
    Thank you so much for your comment xox

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    It's very painful to get hurt by ur friends..I know how much it hurts...But u know life doesn't stop for anybody,so u just learn and gain experience not to repeat the same mistake...
    U should not give so much trust to people bcoz some just use it to harm u...
    Ur poem is so wonderful and I can feel the bitterness in ur heart...Stay strong and never look back...
    It's been a long time since the last time u wrote a poem...I wish to read new stuff for u bcoz Really I enjoy ur poems a lot..They are so close to me...
    Great job honey..Keep it up:)

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveTear

    So nice !

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Well done! this was an an outstanding poem that was beautifully written!

  • 16 years ago

    by Noo track to walk

    Awesome work heba....i love this poem...great job 5/5 !!