Drive by

by A book with no meaning   May 27, 2008


I wipe the tears from my eyes as all the people drive on by
I'm up here in this tree
I watch the world go on around me
The world looks so small from up here
As all the little people drive by in their cars so small
Not knowing all the pain I feel inside
All the tears I've wiped from my pail blue eyes
All the pain all the lies
I just wish for once I had someone to share my pain with
Why can't love be easy
You love him and he loves you

(i made this one in 7th grade in a tree in front my house)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Elyse

    Omg I love that, it reminds me of a bok i read, your soo good :P

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    This is a very nice poem....

    keep it up

    Best wishes,

    Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This waS SWEET EXCELLENT PIECE

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    So sad to think of just being in one place while life goes bvy you and dosn't stop to help. it kind of sucks to be that person, but what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, or does it.

    "Nice write from Poetry Knight"

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This is an interesting poem, but seems to end a little short - maybe if you made the last line "Like you love him
    And he loves you?" or just added a "?" at the end. im not sure, but the rest is good - for anyone, but especially for a 7th grade.
    oh, also, i think you forgot the word tears in the the 1st line, and spelled pale p-a-i-l, like a bucket

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