Another great song, nice title, and your words were so heartfelt and touching. Keep it up!

This was sweet and once again beautiful however I have to be honest and admitt I found this a little corny in parts

4/5

This one was slightly better but there are a few grammar alterations needed in this one. Some of the stanza's on the last line you need to close it out slightly better because it doesn't flow throughout the whole song.

It was a good improvement but i know you'll get there in the end :)