Hmm.. I liked this poem.. Don't get me wrong. But, I'm really shocked you didn't write more. I know the topic you used isn't that big of a topic so you couldn't expand too much on it.. But, I'm sure you could find a way to. Try putting a twist on it. Or just keep explaining the GPS.. and how it's like a map. Ummmm, I don't know. I just don't know why it was so short. But,. nonetheless... Nice start! 5/5