by debbylyn May 27, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
A Summer Rose |
by Rachel RTVW
Brilliant! The flow and word choice are excellent. Vivid imagery and an awesome depiction. Wonderful story telling! |
Beautiful, touching words, I felt quite sad reading this, Debbie this piece is one of your best in my oppinion, its got so much wrapped into it and you've written it in such a way it litterally gave me goosebumps, spectaculary beautiful, outstanding. |
by Ingrid
O-O-Oh! What a beautiful poem! |
by Lonely Rider
Well I read the note first only after that I read the poem...and I was amazed how wonderfully you have picturised the same story in such beautiful way... |
by Cindy
Great job on this write Deb. Imagery is awesome. as are your word choices. Thanks for the notes at the bottom..for those of us that are simple...Like your sister...LOL |