Great job on this write Deb. Imagery is awesome. as are your word choices. Thanks for the notes at the bottom..for those of us that are simple...Like your sister...LOL
Love you

Well I read the note first only after that I read the poem...and I was amazed how wonderfully you have picturised the same story in such beautiful way...
great word choice...
Excellent write...

O-O-Oh! What a beautiful poem!
I so admire you Debbie, there is so much beauty flowing from your pen:)

Superhugs from one of your biggest fans,

Ingrid

Beautiful, touching words, I felt quite sad reading this, Debbie this piece is one of your best in my oppinion, its got so much wrapped into it and you've written it in such a way it litterally gave me goosebumps, spectaculary beautiful, outstanding.
5/5, you are a true star that shines brightly through your writing.

Brilliant! The flow and word choice are excellent. Vivid imagery and an awesome depiction. Wonderful story telling!