Ash, only ash...

by Goodbye   May 28, 2008


I smiled
and they wiped away my smile
I flew a kite
and the rope went broken
I made a sand castle
and someone smashed it

Everything I touch
will turn to ashes

For a moment
they allow me to enjoy
But for the second I do
the joy will be gone
How can I be happy
when I know
Everything I touch
will turn to ashes?

This head is down
My gaze already is low
These eyes have witness
so much sorrow and cruelty
but still always...after all
I looked up to Sun, my Light
I smiled even it hurt...
But now...my precious flower has faded
It never had a change to bloom...

My words are broken
time has stopped
and the wind is spreading my ashes
to everywhere...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This is hauntingly good. A great write...filled with every emotion people don't want to feel...but you made us feel it all right...great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Karan speaks the truth here! Time is very two-faced. brilliantly displayed in this poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow
    such emotions and such a poem. i can see how you feel by reading the poem.
    my friend you really have a talent to express your feelings so don't stop writting

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Time is d biggest pain giver so it is d biggest healer too...

    Sad poem.. written nicely..

    keep writing...

    Best wishz... Karan