This poem translates to a very flawles flow the content has a rare emotional and universal depth 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Awe. a very beautiful write. it really touched me. and the flow was flawless. the way you worded it was perfect as well. it's short, but very emotional. 5/5.

Very beautiful piece :)
Take care Cindy

Awesome poem indeed dear. could feel the depth of it and sadness which flows from every single word you wrote. To translate the same in english is a good idea and both versions holds the same magic. great poem indeed.

all the best and take care

Beautiful translation, very sadly true and I completely get this, these words have great meaning to me.
You've used great ways of giving this piece an incredibly working flow, continuously.
Captured heart and thought, which indeed captured my attention, beautiful 5/5

Tat was lovely...

Keep it up..

Besat wishz... Karan

Thought provoking - I especially like the sound of
"every page of hope has a story of grief engraved in it"