Misspent Time

I can relate to this poem... Whatever who had on this poem going on...frustrarion...negative emotions...you can sense it. A face with no smile staring at him. You have stand enough and tonight you tell this have to stop.

You feel sick about the whole situation.. After speaking him...in the small room...girl walks outside the room and slam the door behind her..

Or maybe I had a wrong vision...but this is what I imagined.. :)

It's a very different poem to what I've seen you do lately and change is always good:) very good write, only thing I would change is that it seems a bit incohesive it's a bit too much freeflow if you will. but the words are awesome!