Wow
you amazed me indeed
deep, passionate and full of emotions
wonderful piece. it shows pain and sorrow

i liked the whole poem but the last stanza got my hearts' attention more

Hi Bella,

This poem could be about me, it is exactly how I feel now...
You did a wonderful job on potraying the pain of a woman in love that cannot have the man of her choice:)

Take care,

Ingrid

Thats amazing... i can feel emotion in your words. wel done.

Woah! your poem was amazing!!
Gr8 Job!!
5/5

That's what's called "first love?!"
u could express it in a very smooth way, i like it
regards
5/5