You Are You

Short poem.. but amazing ^^

i like it

I didn't like that you started your poem with "You"
Maybe you can change that to...

An individual who chooses

Plus,
Reading this poem.
I realize there were a lot of "you"s in there.

Also.
Not just good things makes up a person.

I would've liked to see bad traits in there as well.

For example,
Flawsing ones teeth on the table.

I don't know...

This is such a strong and wonderful message. I really agreed with all the words you expressed in this entire poem. They were so real and I could tell they were coming from you. Such a true poem. I enjoyed it dearly. There was at times that you said "you" way too much, but for this poem to work .. you needed that.. Great work!! 5/5

Short simple and straight to the point... Excellent work done here...it reflects a positive attitude towards life... very motivating piece of work..

keep writing...

Short but nice!
keep it up!
and you're right we should not follow anybody for our own life!
good message!