by VSambulance
When I read it, I felt more like I was sitting in a lecture about self confidence, and self realization. The way you worded things made it seem more like a statement than a poem. There wasn't really a rhythm. Nevertheless, you got what you wanted to say across, plain and simple. Sometimes, that's all you need. Good job. |
Individuality can be an issue in todays society as it has been in the past. We all seem to need to be accepted yet as your poem states so eloquently and simply we are who we are. Individuality can be quite healthy in a profoundly sick society 5>>>> |
A short but powerful poem in which i totally agree on very nice truly 5/5 |
by she
They don't know you |
This poem was short but good. It has a strong message. I agree with it 100%. Keep up the good work. |
Short but nice! |
by Lonely Rider
Short simple and straight to the point... Excellent work done here...it reflects a positive attitude towards life... very motivating piece of work.. |
This is such a strong and wonderful message. I really agreed with all the words you expressed in this entire poem. They were so real and I could tell they were coming from you. Such a true poem. I enjoyed it dearly. There was at times that you said "you" way too much, but for this poem to work .. you needed that.. Great work!! 5/5 |
by eehcuhhhz
I didn't like that you started your poem with "You" |
Short poem.. but amazing ^^ |