Lonely Poetess

by Poetess Lana   May 28, 2008


Possibilities were endless with you by my side,
but you left, and I'm spiraling, spinning
whirling out of control into the darkness that is eventually going to consume me.

Kisses on the cheek, hand, neck, lips,
nothing can compare to what I felt when you were near,
closer than I ever let anybody get before
but then you took it all and disappeared for good.

I gave you my heart, you took it,
left and swore never to come back
I guess it just wasn't enough
that I loved you and you pretended to care.

And now I'm the stupid one, the one who's alone
and lonely, the poetess who's poetry isn't quite
what it used to be, because I have no more inspiration
and nothing to pull me back to Earth so that I fall,

Fall deeper into space,
Gravity can't pull me down now, nothing was
anchoring me here except for you.
You were my anchor...

You can say I never loved you but I'll always
know I tried,

I guess it just wasn't enough

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxShadowxOfxYourxShadowxXMyxMiNdxIsxFrOzEnxX

    This poem is awsome...I rlly loved it...
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Wow AMAZING!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This is extremely amazing. Oh, the subject of love. XD I love it. This is a really great poem. You did a great job. If this is your first poem, I'm sure you're going to improve so much. =) Okay, I'm repeating myself over and over. 5/5. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Jesus... that poem is freaking awesome love... like it's amazing... Your very very best so far I think love... really and truely!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I'm sorry, hon. It's so hard losing somebody in that way. you feel like you're never going to be on earth again and you're always going to be in pain. but know, the harder you fall, the higher yuo bounce. ((wow, that's a horrible metaphor here. lol. sorry)).

    This was a wonderful poem, especially since you've had writer's block the last six or so months. it's simple, but comes across as strong.

    the only thing i would like to see changed would be to add periods and capitlization so that the reader can follow distinct thoughts more clearly. other than that, bravo.

    *hugs*

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