I'm sorry, hon. It's so hard losing somebody in that way. you feel like you're never going to be on earth again and you're always going to be in pain. but know, the harder you fall, the higher yuo bounce. ((wow, that's a horrible metaphor here. lol. sorry)).

This was a wonderful poem, especially since you've had writer's block the last six or so months. it's simple, but comes across as strong.

the only thing i would like to see changed would be to add periods and capitlization so that the reader can follow distinct thoughts more clearly. other than that, bravo.

*hugs*

Jesus... that poem is freaking awesome love... like it's amazing... Your very very best so far I think love... really and truely!

This is extremely amazing. Oh, the subject of love. XD I love it. This is a really great poem. You did a great job. If this is your first poem, I'm sure you're going to improve so much. =) Okay, I'm repeating myself over and over. 5/5. :]

Wow AMAZING!!!

This poem is awsome...I rlly loved it...
5/5