Go ahead and say it. say I don't care, or that I don't understand bianca, but this poem is very powerful, and it does help me to see what I AM able to understand, maybe I won't understand fully, or completely, maybe I won't ever truly see things the way you do, but how you wrote this piece, the words you put into it had a strength and power of their own that allowed me to see clearly as far as I am able to at the moment.

The poem and your words. how you describe everything, I know it's just a piece of what you feel, a glimpse through a keyhole of how you view everything and how the world seems to you, and very well how it may actually, and prolly is, I know you wrote the poem for yourself, but I'm glad you posted it to give a glimpse of what goes through your head that you refuse to explain. The reason I commented, was just to let you know I read it, yea I prolly still don't really get it, but maybe Iget it a little more than I did before, and no dang it that sentence isn't spose to rhyme, it just ended up that way. I give you 5/5 because it's a very powerful, well written, dark,sad poem. good job bianca.

Simply powerful.
simply amazing.
i simply love it.

5/5.

great job&&keep it up.
much love,
mac.<3
[.just.another.silly.teenage.girl.]

I was intreged--is that how you spell it srry

Binaca regardless and with all respect to your feeling i enjoy this piece of poem you touch the right tone in me ,simply great !

Well i literaly blown away with this one !!

perfect no mistake nothing perfect
and even when i was reading i was playing like quitre music i can swear i could imagine myself in that place and fveeling the same

it make me not able to breath

i beleve you exceed yourself here

This has to be one of the most powerful poems i've ever read. it was mesmerizing. it was beautiful yet sad. very well detailed. you expressed yourself well. it was simply amazingg. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

This is a beautiful poem... Lost someone most dear to me to and I'm just finding out alot of stuff that happened to her. If you wanna no more please read my poem FARE WELL OLGA!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, this is truly a captivating and excellent poem, you had me wanting to read more and more by the end, and you were so descriptive. Very well-expressed, nice job.

"Each moon's picture tells the same wistful tale.
Their faces - clear, and yet they're breathing stale.
Through their eyes I see a girl crying, still broken.
With each passing second, cold reality is awoken."

Wonderful word choice here, you keep the reader extremely intrested, and this whole poem was such a pleasure to read. Great job, I can see you have so much talent just from this one piece. Keep writing, always and forever.....

Great word choice!