The heart

by Brennan P   May 28, 2008


My heart and my laws are broken

My feelings remain unspoken

Though this pain and urge grow

My family and friends know

That even though i whip through the sky

My heart, my life,my soul remains to be thine.

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  • 15 years ago

    by XoXoBriannaoXoX

    Wow, this is amazing (:

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Wow you have a lot of potential. liked the poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Excellent!!
    this is deff song material!!
    now i wonder, can u sing? that wuld be awsum, wish i could lol.
    nice job tho!

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Wow that's great! I wish i could hear the whole song. Can you sing? :)

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Part of a song. wow it would be beautiful in a song it really would. i found it very touching its great hun.

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