Critique Simply

by Kik   May 29, 2008


Coming from the bottom my emotions,
These words just come flaring,
Flaring like fire in vaccination potions,
They seem like they have evident meaning,
However to me not all have any notions,
Try to get and go with the flow,
Critiquing but not demeaning,
Fit your self in these words, Act like you know,
No care if you care,
I care what I care,
But still if you have these feelings please share,
No effect or chip on a rock,
On my feelings and esteem,
Just a trip around the knowledge block,
A journey to the extreme,
So I can think outside of the box,
If not,
Kick rocks,
Dock docks,
Lock locks,
Check stocks,
Annoyingly there like rocks in your socks,
Unwanted but wanted is your opinion,
I want your outlook,
But don't pick it apart,
Don't write a book,
Just put the groceries in the cart,
Leave quickly,
Don't act picky,
Pick the canned goods not the cuisine,
Whatever is the simplest,
Just say green,
And not aquamarine...

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  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    This is very good. You seem to have a unique way with words. It's funny, because normally this style wouldn't be what intrigues me, but I just love the way you write.

    5/5

    -Briana