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by Andrew   May 29, 2008


Could she be the one?
Lovely and shining like the sun.
Eyes that sparkle like the star.
Over mountains and oceans afar.

Making me weak and vulnerable.
At the same time making me invincible.
Remembering her smile relaxes my soul.
Just as it encourages me to give my all.
Omitting every dark corner of my being.

Carrying with her all hope and meaning.
Alleviating me from my miseries.
Remembering her face brings memories.
Tantalized by her beauty.
Almost taking me over entirely.
Just as I feel comfortable around her.
Enough to declare that my search is over.
Never thinking of leaving her side.
All my feelings I can no longer hide.
She's all I need by my side...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Awww....loved this, you showed how much you loved her, and you were so descriptive!!
    Just a thought here:

    "Almost taking me over entirely.
    Just as I feel comfortable around her."

    In that big stanza at the end, I think you could make it into two, would be a bit better. So in those two lines I pasted, seperate them
    so they would not be all together but in two different stanzas. Keep writing!