Awww....loved this, you showed how much you loved her, and you were so descriptive!!
Just a thought here:

"Almost taking me over entirely.
Just as I feel comfortable around her."

In that big stanza at the end, I think you could make it into two, would be a bit better. So in those two lines I pasted, seperate them
so they would not be all together but in two different stanzas. Keep writing!