by Han84 May 29, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You loved and lost your way.. |
by Kalee
This is another good poem, Hannah. there is a few little spelling mistakes, like "yoru" should be "your" also with the title, it sounds a bit off. maybe you should change it to "longing a lost love" but its up to you. anyway, other then those little things it is a good poem. |