Longing lost love

by Han84   May 29, 2008


You loved and lost your way..
its no longer a clear day..
your trying to forget..
trying not to regret..
longing lost love..

its a clear day..
your trying to hide away..
with your head low..
feeling your lost in a dome..
like you have no where to go..
longing lost love..

the voice you dont need to hear..
makes your eyes full of tears..
your hearts breaking..
your hearts aching..
longing lost love..

still not knowing which way to go..
all upset beginning to forget..
you loved and lost yoru way..
its a clear day..
sun shinning..
birds chimming..
not a thought about you..
longing lost love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is another good poem, Hannah. there is a few little spelling mistakes, like "yoru" should be "your" also with the title, it sounds a bit off. maybe you should change it to "longing a lost love" but its up to you. anyway, other then those little things it is a good poem.

    Kalee

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