"Giving pulchritude to the sky.."
^ I like the long word here, but I don't know what it means, perhaps use another word easier for readers to understand? I have never heard of that word in my life.
Overall, this people was beautiful.
I [love] love. It's beautiful all together. :]
It's one of my favorite subjects to write about.
I know how it feels to think about someone,
and how easily they can brighten your day even by just looking at them. :]
I love this poem dearly.
Keep writing. 5/5.