Oooh, I like it. :] |
Great job excellently done |
by Blissful
Oh I loved how you ended with a question because it gets the reader thinking about your work long after they finish reading it. I have been in the same postion alone in my room wondering all this questions about love. What I've learned is not to question love but embrace all its beauty even with the pain. Well done my dear *5/5* |
by Sora
This was a wonderful picec, it was fantastic! i loved how you fit a line that was actually a question in there, thats great thinking. and i love the subject you chose, you explained it so well. thank you for sharing this great poem. job well done. 5/5. |