The Fire of Love

by LethaLfeLinE aka ALDZ   May 29, 2008


In the middle of nowhere
I found a diminutive ember
Trying to give resurgence to a fire
Burning with vivid feeling of desire.

I went closer to that torrid flame
Beholding the brilliance it became
As the zephyr gave it life to grow
More resistant than it could ever show.

In a form of a gentle breeze
It was you who rekindled love and care
And rejuvenated the ardent fire of love
That is only for you and no one else can ever have.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    You always happen to use the most amazing words in your poems which makes it refreshing to read from the same old same old. The power and meaning hidden behind your lines was flawless in expressing your deepest emotions. I truly did enjoy this piece. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    Really like this poem. Its really rich in vocabulary and is very expressive. I like the title too, very well thought of and kinda draws you towards knowing whats in the poem. Really great keep up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    Really like this poem. Its really rich in vocabulary and is very expressive. I like the title too, very well thought of and kinda draws you towards knowing whats in the poem. Really great keep up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww!!..i absolutly loved this!..the last stanza was my favorite! loved it!
    great job! 5/5
    Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Awesome write!
    This was beautiful.
    Great word choice, again. :]
    It was a great piece.
    Keep writing. You're doing great.
    5/5.

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