Soul (song)

by Dustin S   May 29, 2008


**When you see (harley), that is telling you how to pronounce the name)

Life. Once I had a great one.
Full all of joy and lotsa fun.
But know its over. Done.
But since that once day,
I was speechless never to say.
She knows what she did to me,
Now she dont know what the f**k I'll be.
I used to be able to clearly see,
But know I just act oh so mysteriosly.
Gee, I wonder just why that is harlea, (harley)
I dont think we'll get along. We just cant agree.
When you left I was in a smile,
Lyin to my self sayin she'll stay a while.
I have shown my soul's depth,
And I should of just suffered Death.
I dont know if this was you goal,
But now when I smile, It's behind s broken Soul.

so now i smile an empty smile,
with an empty soul,
that darkness could so defile,
what I had once had whole.

But thats all behind me now, I've moved on,
For my new life I must re-spawn.
For you think that you could boss,
Me? Mistake. Bad intake. Your loss.
So yeah go ahead and ignore me,
But sooner or later you'll see,
That your moves mistakingly,
Will send you juvy just for persuasivly,
Tryin to trick your way outta arrest,
But actually you're like the rest.
Time to clean, go get the mop,
And clean up before this angry cop,
Arrests you and tells you to stop.
Pick my soul outta your buckit,
Cause my soul said, "F**k it".
I guess you really dont get,
It harlea. I already took off,
And my landing wasn't that soft.

so now i smile an empty smile,
with an empty soul,
that darkness could so defile,
what I had once had whole.

If you were actually that smart,
You would nota siad I played your heart.
But I cant stop you.Your art is you art,
And if you whin, you shouldn't start.
I wont hear you unless you forgive,
Yourself and actually want to live.
Anyway, thanks again for f**kin my life around,
Cause now I am sad. Permentaly down.
I walk around with nothin but a frown,
From colorfull and cool, to damp and brown.
That means you took away my life, my smile,
And completly f**ked up my profile.
Now every single time that I freestyle,
I think, "Should I pick up my phone and call her speed dial?"
I think but never do, thanks to you,
You took my smile and soul too!

so now i smile an empty smile,
with an empty soul,
that darkness could so defile,
what I had once had whole.

One more chance was all I asked, (ask)
But all you said is, "no me and you has past."
I say, "I knew if I haven't screwed up, we would last."
But now if anyonw f**ks wit me, they can kiss my *ss.
So I quit school. I skip my class. I ditched out fast.
I turn all my depression into this. What you see,
Rigt here. What ur readin. Thats just me.
You can be what you wanna be, but I'll be a mystery.
I will one day go down famous in history,
Just by makin you feel everything I see.
My heart has shattered peice by peice,
Until finally my heart beat came to a cease.
You've tooken everything now, so you cant steal any more,
Because you already stole out my whole heart store.
One chance was all I asked for,
But now I wasnt my sould and a smile for a litte more.

so now i smile an empty smile,
with an empty soul,
that darkness could so defile,
what I had once had whole.

So there you go, go get me my knife
I'll just sit here and sculpt my wrist and sculpt my life.
Make it seem like red is the only color here,
Make it seem like red is the only priority here.
I not afraid, I dont have fear,
H**l! I'll die drinking a beer!
You stole my life so I dont care,
Go steal my girl, have an affair.
I guess I wasnt born to desimate,
Humiliate or descriminate,
Anyone but my room mate.
That week I was gone, I was in rehab,
Tryin to regain soul. Something I dont have.
All i have is my person, and hardley that,
Wanna talk? You knowwhere to find me at.
So I think you accomplished yougoal,
You've completly stolen my entire Soul.

so now i smile an empty smile,
with an empty soul,
that darkness could so defile,
what I had once had whole.

copywright (c)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Topaz

    Yo dude i couldnt find the rap you told me about so i just picked one. I dont get how well you can like transist from one ryhme to the next I mean i was like readin it and I was listening to one ryhme and then the next second i didnt even notice that it had changed. Your beastly that you can make it that long but hey theres a difference in rap and rock so Idk

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Some parts are pretty cool, others I'd say to work on more.

    For instance, I wouldn't rhyme Harlea's name as Harley, it just makes it sound like you couldn't find anything else to rhyme her name with. What I do if I really want a certain word or name in a poem is put it at the beginning or middle, the ending has to rhyme, so I just pick another word out of the line to rhyme with.

    Here's an example:

    Instead of, But know I just act oh so mysteriosly.
    Gee, I wonder just why that is harlea, (harley)

    It could be, But know I just act oh so mysteriously.
    Gee Harlea, you never take me seriously.

    See what I mean? And if you can't get the first to rhyme with anything else that sounds good you could always switch up both lines or start from scratch.

    I feel some of your rhymes were just put there for the sake of rhyming which makes it sound too mediocre. You're getting way better than when we first met though. Just keep exploring. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Demetrice

    Im very impressed i really like the last one before the choris btu its all really good man im real f**king ipressed my friend if you need me to write you any thing like it again i would be honerd.