Comments : Maybe

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Wow
    i knoe how u feel, well in a diff way but i do,
    my dad cheated on my mom wen i wasnt even born and when i wuz 2 months he wanted a divorce, it was final on my 1st b-day
    within a few months he was married to the chick he cheated on my mom w/and she had 2 kids, well lik 9 years latter, they're divorced

  • 16 years ago

    by tigerdan

    Our parents don't realize sometimes decisions they make affects us too. :(

    very good poem, and I feel your pain through these words.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    You are such a talent writer. I really liked this one. You have such a way with words. I love how your words and emotions work together to tell a story. Amazing job my friend. Nik

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    I love my family and love that we are together..my life will be disgust if that happened...your poem was so sad..i feel your feeling and feel the pain of breaking apart of your family..but then, just stay stronger..sometimes life teased us to be more stronger...love this poem=)